Tuesday, April 15, 2014

Krista Ramsey

http://www.cincinnati.com/story/opinion/columnists/krista-ramsey/2014/03/08/krista-ramsey-new-adoption-law-ohio/6222347/

There is a girl not far from here that is an orphan fairly old (she is 23), but she wants to meet her birth parents. And shes been trying for a while to meet them or get any sort of contact with them and now court is letting her see her birth certificate with contact information. "The 23-year-old Western Hills resident is one of 400,000 Ohio adoptees who, for the first time in their lives, will have access to the names of their biological parents and the details of their birth ." This line shows  that out of that many people having the same problem as her so far she is the only one who has gotten opportunity. Her word choice is very nice like when she says "for the first time in their lives" that really made me want to read more. And she keeps her words really flowing. Her writing style is definitely to inform you could tell by looking at some of her titles and articles. But i really didn't enjoy reading that besides the first 2 paragraph's it was pretty boring.

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